高考英语写作素材:典型的八大错误

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  • 一对一辅导
  • 2019-05-07 11:41:44
错误类型 1:动词做主语
保护环境非常重要。
错句举例:Protect the environment is very important.
纠正:哪些词性可以做主语呢?
(1) 名词做主语
The earth is home to us human.
(2) 代词做主语
We should do our utmost to protect the environment.
(3) 非谓语动词(动名词,不定式)
Protecting the environment is very important.
(4) 从句做主语
What many people have not realized is that rapid economic
development has brought us serious environmental degradation.
 
 
错误类型 2:主谓不一致
燃烧化石燃料会产生大量的有害气体。
错句举例:Burning fossil fuels produce a large quantity of toxic gases.
类似于这样的错误句子还有:
Reading books help me gain knowledge.
Eating hamburger do great harm to our health.
很多同学不注意单数第三人称。
小时写:He go to school. (×)
长大写:Science help us to understand the world. (×)
其实这些句子应该是:
1. Burning fossil fuels produces a large quantity of toxic gases.
2. Reading books helps me gain knowledge.
3. Eating hamburger does great harm to our health.
4. He goes to school.
5. Science helps us to understand the world.
 
错误类型 3:to do 和 to doing 
我们应该重视环境保护。
错句举例:We should pay special attention to protect our environment.
我们试着来比较:
We should pay special attention to our environment.
We should pay special attention to protect our environment. (×)
名词— 动名词
后方跟 doing 的短语举例:
a. devote … to
As a physicist, I will devote my lifetime to advancing the science and
technology to our country.
a. get used/accustomed to …
He gradually got used/accustomed to staying up late.
a. look forward to …
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
a. 
object to …
Conservationists strongly object to opening up more factories
around the river.
a. 
stick to …
China invariably sticks to implementing the low-carbon policy.
a. pay attention to …
We should pay special attention to protecting our environment.
 
 
错误类型 4:副词和连词不分
污染税增加了车主的负担,但是这可以拯救我们的环境。
错句举例:Pollution tax may add to the drivers’burden, however, it will
eventually help to save our environment.
注意连词和副词的关系。
哪些是连词?
although, but, while, whereas
哪些是副词?
however, nevertheless, nonetheless
修改方式:
第一种:Although _______, ________.
第二种:_________, but _________.
第三种:_________; however, _______.
第四种:__________. However, _______.
 
因此可以改成:
(1) 
Pollution tax may add to the drivers’ burden, but it will eventually
help to save our environment.
(2) 
Although pollution tax may add to the drivers’ burden, it will
eventually help to save our environment.
(3) 
Pollution tax may add to the drivers’ burden. However, it will
eventually help to save our environment.
(4) 
Pollution tax may add to the drivers’ burden; however, it will
eventually help to save our environment.
 
错误类型 5:句子概念混乱
好的环境让我们安居乐业,享受生活,人们在好的环境中都能长寿
错句举例:A good environment allows us to live peacefully, work happily,
enjoy our lives, people tend to prolong their lifespan in such an
environment.
写句子的人没有句子的概念:主句不能有两个单独的谓语动词
该句的单词包括:work, live, enjoy, tend
句子可以改成:
A good environment allows us to live peacefully, work happily and enjoy
our lives. People tend to prolong their lifespan in such an environment.
 
错误类型 6:动词时态错误
过去,人们倾向相信,环境污染不可避免。
错句举例:In the past, people tend to believe it is inevitable to make
pollution.
很多同学时态概念不强,甚至很随意。
In the past, people tend to believe it was inevitable to make pollution
注意:写动词需要注意几
1. 语态 2. 时态 3. 情
In the past, people tended to believe it was inevitable to make pollution.
请记得:有时间状语,必须修改动词
还有关于过去式和完成式
For the past several years, China has witnessed a burgeoning economy.
 
错误类型 7:单数可数名词单用
我们爱狗。
错句举例:We love dog.
判断:
We love dog. (√) (×)
We love a dog. (√) (×
We love dogs. (√) (×)
We love the dog. (√) (×
比如:We love the environment as much as we love dogs.
单数可数名词不可以单独使用!
判断:
We should attach great importance to develop good habit. (√ or ×)
 
错误类型 8:代词使用错误
中国正在面临严重的环境问题。作为一个大学生,我们应该重视保护我们的地球。
错句举例:Currently, China is facing a serious environmental issue. As a
university student, we should attach great importance to protecting our
planet.
作为一个 90 后,我应该重视保持健康。
错句举例:As the post-90’s generation, I should pay special attention to
maintaining good health.
可以改成:
Currently, China is facing a serious environmental issue. As a university
student, one should attach great importance to protecting our planet.
As the post-90’s generation, we should pay special attention to
maintaining good health.

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